There were a couple parts that seemed a little off (that you, valued citizen felt a little too boilerplate), but I think it held up to casual scruntiny pretty well. (I mean, consider how many people bought it!)
Could've been better, but it could've been a lot worse.
(Then again, I haven't been paying as much attention to this kind of thing as I used to. It's been a while since I've had reasons to pick people's mannerisms apart!)
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Date: 2008-04-02 01:57 am (UTC)Could've been better, but it could've been a lot worse.
(Then again, I haven't been paying as much attention to this kind of thing as I used to. It's been a while since I've had reasons to pick people's mannerisms apart!)