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indesolutionThere are some changes that I think need to be made, Yamamoto! I watched your footwork and swordplay during that fight and I've decided that you are far from the place where you need to be right now! I don't care if you have a special sword or nine moves. You need to be able to improvise in the course of a fight! Not every fight will offer you the elements and you need to be able to practice some proper swordplay otherwise. Our training is going to double in the load until I see a difference! I also think the names of your moves are pretty stupid, but I can't think that a fool like you would come up with something better.
Here's a list of things you need to change to get better.
1. You need to be faster. Rely more on your body and less on your sword! It's an extension of yourself. Make it a part of you as you're moving!
2. The styles take too long to pull off! Practice normal stuff first.
3. You aren't a baseball player when you have the sword! I don't want to see you doing that again. This is the way of the sword!
4. I want to see what that ring can do. It has special properties.
Got it, Yamamoto? Figure out some of these things and what they mean! Your technique isn't worth bothering with right now. Everything's been luck with you so far and all you do is look like a fool when you grin like that! I'll make your obstacles harder tomorrow. You may even have to use your other arm!
Be lucky no one's here from the 11th Division. I'd make them train you! They'd like seeing you try. It gets pretty boring after a while, and I finally found some good reading material.
Here's a list of things you need to change to get better.
1. You need to be faster. Rely more on your body and less on your sword! It's an extension of yourself. Make it a part of you as you're moving!
2. The styles take too long to pull off! Practice normal stuff first.
3. You aren't a baseball player when you have the sword! I don't want to see you doing that again. This is the way of the sword!
4. I want to see what that ring can do. It has special properties.
Got it, Yamamoto? Figure out some of these things and what they mean! Your technique isn't worth bothering with right now. Everything's been luck with you so far and all you do is look like a fool when you grin like that! I'll make your obstacles harder tomorrow. You may even have to use your other arm!
Be lucky no one's here from the 11th Division. I'd make them train you! They'd like seeing you try. It gets pretty boring after a while, and I finally found some good reading material.
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